湖北中考英语作文及范文 发布时间：2019-06-09 11:20:27
2015湖北卷
真题展示
请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
写作小贴士
※叙述时必须注意使用一些连接词，使得行文结构清晰，所举事例要切合主旨。
※写作时要注意好时态和人称。
满分范例一
As we all know, it’s undoubtedly significant for us to become a responsible member of the society. However, much to our surprise, it’s not that difficult for us to grow into such a person. Even small things will do.
I can remember doing some voluntary work with my classmates in the nursing home near our school on May Day. On our arrival, we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, we started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.① With everything done, we sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.②
When it was time to leave, the elderly people expressed their thanks for our love and help. Tired as we were, we all felt so proud, for what we did has not only brought joy to others, but also enriched our own lives.③
满分简评
本文紧扣题目要求，通过描述去敬老院献爱心的事件，向我们讲述了小事情所带来的积极影响，结构清晰，要点齐全。叙述部分恰当运用了一些连接词：however, then等使得文章条理清晰，连贯自然。
①“cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor” 中现在分词作伴随状语，体现考生功底。
② 使用了独立主格结构with everything done, 提升了文章的档次。
③“for what we did has not only brought joy to others, but also enriched our own lives” 中主语从句和并列连词的使用，使文章加分不少。
词汇积累
undoubtedly 毫无疑问地 significant 有意义的
enrich 使丰富
译文
众所周知，成为一个有责任感的社会成员对我们来说毫无疑问是非常有意义的。然而，让我们感到惊讶的是，成为这样一个人并没有那么困难。甚至很小的一件事情就可以实现。
我还记得在五一劳动节那天跟我的同学一起到学校附近的敬老院去开展志愿者活动。一到达那里，我们就向老人们赠送了鲜花和水果。然后，我们就立刻开始劳动了，有的擦窗户，有的扫地。所有这些事情做完了之后，我们就坐在院子里跟老人们聊天。
当我们要离开的时候，老人们纷纷向我们表示感谢，感谢我们的爱与帮助。尽管我们都很累了，但是我们深感自豪，因为我们所做的事情不仅仅给别人带去了快乐，而且也丰富了我们自己的人生。
满分范例2
Surprising as it may sound, even small things can contribute to helping us to grow up into responsible members of the society, which is of great importance.
I will always remember what happened when I was on a visit to a beautiful lake in the countryside last Sunday.① Having arrived at the lake, I sat on the bench, ready to enjoy the scenery.② However, just at that moment, I heard a girl calling for help. It was obvious that she was drowning. I immediately rushed around the lake to search for her and found her almost in the center of the lake struggling. On seeing that, I dived into the lake without hesitation and swam towards her.③ Eventually, I bought her back to the bank and rushed her to the hospital with the help of others.
When all the people expressed their praise and thanks to me, I felt very proud and happy. And since then, I have decided to make myself be a responsible member of the society.
满分简评
本文结构清晰，行文流畅，讲述了勇救落水女孩的事件，提醒我们凡事从身边小事做起。文中连接词和高级语法的使用是亮点，文章分别用having arrived, just at that moment, on seeing that, immediately, eventually等来标明时间发生的经过，使得行文清晰流畅。
①remember后接what引导的宾语从句，宾语从句的使用为本文的亮点之一。
②having arrived为现在分词作时间状语，体现了考生的写作能力。
③On seeing…的句型的使用也可看出考生对英语的把握。
译文
尽管听起来有些令人惊讶，然而甚至小小的事情都可以有助于我们成为有责任感的社会公民，这对我们来说是非常重要的。
我永远都记得上周日我去乡下一个美丽小湖泊游玩时发生的事情。一到达湖边，我就坐在长凳上，准备好好欣赏一下这美丽的风景。然而，就在这个时候，我听到了一个女孩喊救命。很显然她是落水了。我迅速绕湖跑着去寻找她，然后发现她正在离湖中心不远处挣扎着。一看见这个情景，我毫不犹豫地跳入湖水里然后朝她游去。最终，我把她带回湖岸然后在别人的帮助下迅速将她送往医院。
当所有人都向我表达称赞和感激的时候，我感到万分的自豪和喜悦。从那时起，我就下定决心一定要让自己成为一个有责任感的社会公民。
满分范例3
I always held the opinion that it is challenging to be a responsible member of the society.① However, an activity to remind my schoolmates to stop wasting has changed my attitude towards it.
The activity was held by our class last week. First of all, we informed our schoolmates to face the problem that some students waste water, electricity, food, paper and so on.② Besides, we also help them realize that these bad habits will not only waste the limited natural resources, but they can also have a bad effect on the formation of our character and personality. Most importantly, we took the lead in reducing the waste.
Thanks to such an activity, we all start with ourselves to save everything useful around. I am also aware that even a small thing we do can help us grow up into responsible members of the society.③
满分简评
文章通过描述一项班级号召减少浪费的活动，来说明小事情可以带来大的影响。关联词的使用使文章结构清晰，叙述流畅，同时文章也运用了一些高级词汇和复杂语法，利用first of all, besides, more importantly作为连接词，使得全文连贯、紧凑。
①开篇就使用that引导的同位语从句，体现考生娴熟的写作手法。
②同位语从句的再次使用，提升了该文的档次。
③aware后接that引导的宾语从句也为本文加分不少。
译文
我曾经认为成为一个有责任的社会公民是一件颇具挑战的事情。然而，一个提醒我校同学们停止浪费的活动改变了我对这个事件的看法。
这个活动是上一周由我们班级组织的。首先，我们告知同学们去关注有一些同学浪费水电、食物、纸张等的问题。此外，我们也帮助同学们去认识这些坏习惯不仅仅浪费了我们有限的自然资源，而且对我们人格和性格的形成也将产生消极的影响。更重要的是，我们班级同学还带头减少各项资源的浪费。
由于这样一个活动，我们学校的同学都从自身做起来节约身边的有用的事情。而我也通过这个活动意识到了即便是一件小事，都可以帮助我们成长为有责任感的社会成员。
满分范例4
As a matter of fact, it is not hard to become a responsible member of the society. Since yesterday, I firmly believed that small things can also make a great difference.①
Yesterday morning, my mom told something about my neighbor Uncle Wang and I got to know that his son was too busy to take care of him. Feeling sorry for that, I decided to do something I can to give him a helping hand.② Firstly, I swept and mopped the floor to give the house a thorough clean. Shortly after, I wiped the dust off all the furniture and put everything in the house into place. After that, I put the clothes that needed washing into the washing machine. Meanwhile, I began to prepare lunch so that Uncle Wang could enjoy a delicious meal.③
Having finished all the work, tired as I was, I felt very happy and proud of what I had done. What’s more, I was aware that I should make good use of my spare time to help others.
满分简评
本文通过讲述利用空闲时间帮助邻居做家务的事情，启示我们要乐于帮助别人，让自己成为一个有社会责任感的人。文章用语准确，句式多变，运用连接词firstly, shortly after, after that, meanwhile等使得文章叙述清晰流畅。
①that small things will…宾语从句运用得当，是本文的亮点之一。
②feeling sorry for that为现在分词短语作原因状语，体现考生娴熟的语言功底。
③so that引导的结果状语从句， 再次体现考生的水平。
译文
事实上，成为一个有责任感的社会公民并不是一件很困难的事。自从昨天以来，我坚定地相信小事情也可以产生大影响。
昨天早晨，我的母亲告诉我一些关于我的邻居王伯伯的事情，我知道了他的儿子太忙了不能照料他。我为此感到很难过，所以就决定去做些力所能及的事情来帮助他。首先，我彻底清洗了房间的地板。接下来，我把家具上的灰尘擦去，又把屋里的东西放在合适的位置。在那之后，我把需要洗的衣服都放在了洗衣机里。同时，我开始准备午饭，以便让王伯伯可以享用一顿可口的午餐。
完成这些之后，尽管觉得有些累，但我仍然为自己做的事情感到开心和自豪。此外，我也意识到我应该充分利用我的空闲时间来帮助别人。
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