中考英语作文复习 发布时间：2019-06-08 11:26:35
中考英语作文专题复习（一）个人情况
一、 与专题相关的话题项目：
Personal information/ Daily routines/ personal interests/ feelings and moods
二、 与话题相关的知识准备：
1. 相关单元：七上 Unit 2 Daily life, Unit8 Collecting things
七下 Unit 8 From hobby to career
八下 unit 8 Life in the future
2. 语法相关：一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时
3. 词语相关：
描写人物外貌特征的形容词有：
tall，short, old, young, thin/slim, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fat/plump, well built等
描写人物性格特征的形容词：
kind, friendly, smart, outgoing，funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy, lovely，hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active 等。
描写兴趣爱好时可能用到的单词或短语有：
hobby, favorite , be interested in, be fond of, enjoy /like doing, be keen on ,be friendly to ,prefer…to…等。
4. 经典句型：
Ø I study at … Middle School.
Ø I'm in Class … Grade … .
Ø I am good at ….
Ø My best subject is ….
Ø I am keen on ….
Ø I am interested in ….
Ø My hobby is doing….
Ø I enjoy doing… very much.
Ø I think it is … to….
Ø I study very hard at school.
Ø I want to be … in the future.
Ø I used to be …
Ø I’m interested in …
Ø I often …
Ø I practice … very hard.
Ø I am glad …
Ø I want to … when I grow up.
Ø My favourite subject is …
Ø You are the candle lighting my future. （你就像一支蜡烛,照亮我的前程）
二、经典例题：（2009年 广州市中考考题）
你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“All about me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1、 你的爱好；
2、 你的优点和缺点；
3、 用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。
注意：1、词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2、不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
All about me
My name is Li Hua and I’m from Class 2, Junior 3. ...
解题思路：
1. 审题：
a. 本文共有 3 个要点
b. 时态主要采用 一般现在时
c. 人称是___I______
2. 可能用到的短语和句型
a. 你的爱好
enjoy /like doing, be friendly to ,prefer…to…等。
Ø My hobby is doing….
Ø I am keen on ….
b. 你的优点
hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active
Ø My best subject is ….
Ø I am good at ….
Ø My favourite subject is …
c. 你的缺点
Ø My weakest subject is ….
Ø I am poor at ….
3. 成文：
I like playing football and basketball. I am always playing basketball on P.E. lesson. At my free times, I often play football with my friends. We are enjoy ourself. At study, I good at maths, but I poor in English. I can’t get high grade at my English. I can’t get high grade at my English, now I am do more English exectrise so that I can improve my English. I should do more in my study.
点评：
整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式
4. 检查思路：
完成作文自查表：
1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。
2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。
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项目 |
第一次自查 |
第二次自查 |
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布局与内容要点 |
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人称 时态、主谓一致 |
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动词搭配、介词搭配 |
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拼写错误 |
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好词好句 |
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分项分档评分表
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项目 |
要素 |
给分表 |
内容
6分 |
切合题意，体现要点 |
6-5．5 |
5—4.5
4.5 |
4-3.5
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3-2.5 |
2 |
1.5 |
1 |
0 |
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有所发挥 |
准确性
6分 |
语 法 |
6-5.5 |
5—4.5 |
4-3.5
4 |
3-2.5 |
2 |
1.5 |
1 |
0 |
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词 汇 |
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机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误 |
流畅性
3分 |
结构 |
3-2.5 |
2-1.5
2 |
1 |
0.5 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
0 |
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自评总分： 10.5 |
5. 参考例文：
My name is Li Hua and I’m from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I’ve collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I’m not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends, sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school. Maybe I should study harder, then I can learn better.(增加正能量，给老师好印象0
三、 练习：
假如你叫李芳，昨天从报纸上看到海珠区要组织一次“全民学英语”活动，在暑假要招聘一批英语志愿者的广告，你想应聘。请你用英语写一封简短的书信，根据表格提供信息，表示愿意为广州市民服务。
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姓名 |
李芳 |
年龄 |
15 |
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身高 |
160cm |
健康状况 |
良好 |
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性格 |
外向（outgoing） |
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爱好 |
体育运动 |
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特长 |
英语, 唱歌，跳舞 |
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其他情况 |
E-mail address：lifang15@21cn.com |
Dear Sir,
I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I’d like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.
注意：1. 词数80-100个
2. 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名
3. 可适当发挥。
解题思路：
1. 审题：
a. 本文共有 个要点
b. 时态主要采用
c. 人称是_________
2. 可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）
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3. 可能用到的句型
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4. 成文：
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检查思路：
完成作文自查表：
1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。
2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。
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项目 |
第一次自查 |
第二次自查 |
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布局与内容要点 |
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人称 时态、主谓一致 |
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动词搭配、介词搭配 |
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拼写错误 |
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好词好句 |
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参考例文：
Dear Sir,
I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I’d like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.
My name is Li Fang. I am fifteen, and I am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl, so I would like to make friends with others. In my free time, I like doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing table tennis and so on. I think it is good for ourhealth and I am quite healthy. I am also good at singing and dancing. My best subject is English. I always find the chance to practise my English. And I won the first prize in the English speech competition in our school last year.
If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, please send me an e-mail to lifang15@21cn.com, I will try my best to do the job well.
Yours truly,
Li Fang
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